Feedback for Draft

After completing my first draft of my analytical report I had to ponder how to get feedback on the report. To do this I have decided to talk with friends and family and have them look over my paper and see if they feel anything should be changed. In doing this I will be able to find out any errors in grammar and composition. I will also be able to get an outside look into the world of advertising, which should give me helpful input into this project as a whole. After this is done I plan to solicit feedback from the Fargo Theater. This will be very easy as all I will have to do is schedule an appointment with Margie Bailey. Once I have made the appointment I will then ask her what she thought of my effort to help the Fargo Theater and how she feels about the class project in general. I would like to find out specifically about my report and if she may consider hiring me onto their staff. I am not looking for entry level, but rater somewhere in upper management possibly right under Margie. This will take a lot of work and effort, but if I was to do this it would definitely be the ultimate feedback on this report.